What policies do you wish your government would make?

Hello, Sir [이름]!

Living in apartments has been widespread in your country even from the past. But, those apartments are way too decent compared to the squatter areas here in my country. Do you think the housing problem can still be resolved? Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

~Teacher Eunice

There are 3 type of human desire.

>>> There are three types of human desire.

>>> OR: There are three types of human necessities.  

They are the desire to eat, the residence and the desire to wear.

>>> They are the desire of food, clothes, and shelter.

Korea has been having a problem about house problem. 

>>> Korea has been struggling with housing problem. 

Everybody can\'t purchase their house in their life, because the price of it is incredibly expensive.

>>> Everybody can\'t purchase a house for themselves, because the price of it is incredibly expensive.  

Buying a own house is the best dream for Korean. 

>>> Buying your own house is the best dream for Koreans.  

If people didn\'t spend their money at all, they could buy their own house after 20 years.

>>> If people don\'t spend their money at all, they could buy their own house after 20 years.

Industrialization enhance people\'s life. 

>>> Industrialization enhances people\'s life. 

However,the polarization of wealth has become more serious.

>>> correct!

>>> OR: The polarization of society between rich and poor people has become more serious. 

I want our government to stabilize the house price and to solve the polarization.

>>> correct!     

>>>OR: I want our government to stabilize the house price, and to solve the population.

Our government has tried a lot to lower the house problem for a long time.
>>> Our government has tried a lot to lower the housing problem for a long time. 

It were providing enough house, controlling loan from the bank and imposing high rate of taxes.

>>> It was providing enough houses, controlling loans from the bank, and imposing high rate of taxes.

But most time, they failed to control the house price. 

>>> But most of the time, they failed to control the house price. 

Experts insist that it is impossible thing. 

>>> Experts insist that it is an impossible thing.  

I hope our government can solve the problem related with our basic desire.

>>> I hope our government can solve the problem related to our basic desire.