What position would you like to try in the future? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the future, I’d like to become the head of a research institute. I want to work with a great team and develop products that can really help people and make a positive difference in the world. My goal is to create a fun and collaborative environment where we can achieve meaningful results together.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you\'d be able to try this position in the future!
~T. Divina^^
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In the future, I’d like to become the head of a research institute. I want to work with a great team and develop products that can really help people and make a positive difference in the world. My goal is to create a fun and collaborative environment where we can achieve meaningful results together.
>>Your paragraph is already grammatically correct! Keep up the good work~
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