What possibilities in your life do you wish you hadn\'t gone throught?
학생이 쓴 원문
Probably, I don\'t want to that my parents will be passed away. Even if I can\'t avoid it and prevent it. It\'s my responsibility that I will take it.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Raven
>> Probably, I don\'t want the possibility of my parents pas[이름]g away.
Even if I can\'t avoid it and prevent it.
>> Although, I can\'t avoid and prevent it.
It\'s my responsibility that I will take it.
>> It\'s my responsibility to take it.
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