What preparation will you do before an interview to make a good impression?
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Making a good impression is so important. To make a good impression, Firstly, I will buy a tidy suit. Secondly, I will practice about exact pronunciations because I think to talk about my thoughts, pronunciation is really important. Thirdly, I will think about questions which I may have to answer and I will answer. Fourthly, I will do my best to control my mind because when I interview, if I can\'t control my mind, clearly, I will not be able to talk anything.
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Hi Kimberly :)
There is a saying that \"First impressions last\" so we have to make the best out of it. Those are actually god practices to make good impressions.
Making a good impression is so important.
>> CORRECT
To make a good impression, Firstly, I will buy a tidy suit.
>> to make a good impression, I need to buy a tidy suit.
Secondly, I will practice about exact pronunciations because I think to talk about my thoughts, pronunciation is really important.
>> Second, I will practice my pronunciations because it is very important.
Thirdly, I will think about questions which I may have to answer and I will answer.
>> Third, i will think about the probable questions which I may need to answer.
Fourthly, I will do my best to control my mind because when I interview, if I can\'t control my mind, clearly, I will not be able to talk anything.
>> And lastly, I will do my best to control my mind because during interviews, I can\'t control and I won\'t be able to talk.
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