What pricey that I want
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to buy own my house. It is the pricey one that I want. I hope to buy it and live there. If I buy it and could chose I would definitely buy the house with garden and second floor. I would enjoy BBQ party in there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas!
Everybody wants to own a house, may that be big or small, a house is a place of our comfort and peace.
You had a chance before to own one but due to unexpected circumstances, it will be delayed. So, next year, go strong and get that house!
Study my suggestions in grammar. You did a great job!
See you soon again.
-T. Donna~
>> I would like to buy my own house.
It is the pricey one that I want.
>> Correct!
I hope to buy it and live there.
>> Correct!
If I buy it and could chose I would definitely buy the house with garden and second floor.
>> If I buy it and could chose I would definitely buy the house with a garden and a second floor.
I would enjoy BBQ party in there.
>> I would enjoy BBQ party there.
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