What problems can a tropical climate [이름]nge bring.

2025-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think the many problems in tropical because many bug and mosquitoes in tropical. So tropical is very dangerous.

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Hi Jimmy!

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I think the many problems in tropical because many bug and mosquitoes in tropical.
>>> I think there are many problems in tropical areas because there are many bugs and mosquitoes.
>>> OR: I believe tropical areas are dangerous because of the bugs and mosquitoes.

So tropical is very dangerous.
>>> That’s why I think tropical places can be dangerous.

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