what problems do gays have in military?
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In military, they never come out.
>> CORRECT!
Because in Korea, especially, some mens hate gays.
>> Because in Korea, especially, some mens hate gays.
And they even discriminate just girly men either.
>> CORRECT!
Whatsmore, normally, in Korea military, violences and mental assaults from corporal to his men is quite severe and unstoppable.
>> What\' s more, normally, in Korean military, violences and mental assaults from corporal to his men is quite severe and unstoppable.
And the assailants are never punished. So they are supressed to hide their sexuality implicitly.
>> CORRECT!
However, conversely, sometimes gays are the problem to non-gays.
>> CORRECT!
Because they use their power to sexually abuse subordinate.(Of course, the victims are men.)
>> Because they use their power to sexually abuse their subordinates. (Of course, the victims are men.)
But as I said, the assailants are not punished.
>> CORRECT!
So the victims cannot even reveal the truth, and his pain.
>> So the victims cannot even reveal the truth, and their pain.
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