What problems do poor people have?
학생이 쓴 원문
Poor people have no home or live in small houses.
Poor people live hard because most people do not have good jobs and have low incomes.
Poor people do not have a cultural life because they have to cut down on their living expenses.
But some of them think they are mentally happy, although they lack materiality.
Does \'sacrifice\' and \'passed away\' mean the same thing?
강사 첨삭
This composition is so true! ^^
Poor people live hard because most people do not have good jobs and have low incomes.
>> CORRECT!
Poor people do not have a cultural life because they have to cut down on their living expenses.
>> CORRECT!
But some of them think they are mentally happy, although they lack materiality.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sacrifice and passed away do not have the same meaning.
Pass away means \"to die\".
Sacrifice means the offering of animal, plant, or human life or of some material possession to a deity, as in propitiation or homage. Or to give something up for another person\'s sake.
~t. Ally
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Poor people have no home or live in small houses.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Poor people live hard because most people do not have good jobs and have low incomes.
>> CORRECT!
Poor people do not have a cultural life because they have to cut down on their living expenses.
>> CORRECT!
But some of them think they are mentally happy, although they lack materiality.
>> But some of them think they are mentally happy, although they lack materialism.
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