What problems have you had recently? How do you usually resolve problems?

2021-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I recently considered where I work. I had two choice. first I can apply to small company as a regular employee. second I can enter the big company as an intern. It\'ll be held presentation about intern at April 27th. If I can be regular employee after intern in big company, I\'ll challenge internship. but If it\'s impossible to be regular employee after internship, I\'ll enter to small company.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! We all have problems that comes in different sizes. Some are big, some are small. It just depends on how we look at it and solve it :) I think it\'s very important not to panic and think of a solution calmly. Good luck on your internship!^^

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I recently considered where I work.
>> I am recently considering where I will work.

I had two choice.
>>> I have two choices.

First I can apply to small company as a regular employee.
>> First, I can apply in a small company as a regular employee.

second I can enter the big company as an intern.
>> Second, I can enter a big company as an intern.

It\'ll be held presentation about intern at April 27th.
>>The presentation for interns will be held on April 27th.

If I can be regular employee after intern in big company, I\'ll challenge internship.
>> If I can be a regular employee after intern in a big company, I\'ll change my internship.

but If it\'s impossible to be regular employee after internship, I\'ll enter to small company.
>> But if it\'s impossible to be regular employee after internship, I\'ll enter the small company.

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