What qualifies an actor as the best actor?

2020-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think that Qulifies as the best actor is whether they played several character`s role and made audience focus on some scene. Rather than showing off actor`s appearance, They have to consider How they makes viewers sympathize with that charactors. I can`t remember that when the happening was occured, but I want to talk you about some accident in drama award. In the process of giving award to the best actor, one of mc had openly pointed out an actor`s appearance and styles in a stage. but the other actors and public was recognizing him as one of best actor. At that time I couldn`t understand his behaviors and comments. Because the big aim of drama award is choosing one who received support from the other actors and public. I want some of public to change their awareness.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. That is indeed disappointing for an emcee to say. The best actor should definitely be recognized for his skill and ability, not for his/ her appearance.
- T. Beth
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I think that Qulifies as the best actor is whether they played several character`s role and made audience focus on some scene.
>>> I think what qualifies someone as the best actor would be whether they played several character roles and made the audience focus on some scenes.    
Rather than showing off actor`s appearance, They have to consider How they makes viewers sympathize with that charactors.
>>> Rather than showing off the actor`s appearance, they have to consider how they make viewers sympathize with that character.  
I can`t remember that when the happening was occured, but I want to talk you about some accident in drama award.
>>> I can`t remember exactly when the incident occurred, but I want to talk to you about some of these incidents in drama awards.    
In the process of giving award to the best actor, one of mc had openly pointed out an actor`s appearance and styles in a stage. 
>>> In the process of giving the award to the best actor, one of emcee had openly pointed out an actor`s appearance and style on stage.   
but the other actors and public was recognizing him as one of best actor. 
>>>  But the other actors and the public recognize him as one of the best actors.   
At that time, I couldn`t understand his behaviors and comments. 
>>> correct   
Because the big aim of drama award is choosing one who received support from the other actors and public. 
>>> correct   
I want some of public to change their awareness.
>>> I wish for the public to change their awareness.

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