What qualities do you look for in a friend?

2023-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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Well, I tend to look for something what you\'re doing for the future. For example, nothing that you\'re doing for the your future, I need to consider a relationship with you because I personally think it doesn\'t help me. And other thing that I see the quality of friends is how much you\'re mature. You know, I really hate someone who acts a kid even he/she became an adult. So it\'s important to me.

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Exciting Thursday to you, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.

Well, I tend to look for something what you\'re doing for the future. 
>>> Well, I tend to look for someone else\' goals and dreams.

For example, nothing that you\'re doing for the your future, I need to consider a relationship with you because I personally think it doesn\'t help me.
>>> For example, you don\'t have any plans for your future, then I wouldn\'t want to be in a relationship with you because I personally think that the situation doesn\'t help me in all aspects.

And other thing that I see the quality of friends is how much you\'re mature.
>>> I also look for the maturity level of my friends.

You know, I really hate someone who acts a kid even he/she became an adult.
>>> I really hate someone who is childish.

So it\'s important to me.
>>> Those factors are important to me.

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