What qualities do you look for in a friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
i look for about two qualities in friends.
first, we have to respect one\'s elders.
people don\'t respect one\'s elders are bad personality.
second, we should nice words.
people who use bad words, bad language, and negative language give to me negative energe.
i think these two ways are very important.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I totally agree with you! A kind and respectful friend can be a positive influence on you, and at least you know you’re friends with a good person. I think respecting others is also very important since it shows the kind of personality they have.
- T. Caitlyn
i look for about two qualities in friends.
>> I look for two qualities in friends.
first, we have to respect one\'s elders.
first, we have to respect one\'s elders.
>> First, we have to respect our elders.
people don\'t respect one\'s elders are bad personality.
people don\'t respect one\'s elders are bad personality.
>> People who don\'t respect their elders have a bad personality.
second, we should nice words.
second, we should nice words.
>> Second, we should use nice words.
people who use bad words, bad language, and negative language give to me negative energe.
people who use bad words, bad language, and negative language give to me negative energe.
>> People who use bad words or negative language give me negative energy.
i think these two ways are very important.
i think these two ways are very important.
>> I think these two qualities are very important.
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