What qualities do you look for in a good movie?
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I think that a good movie must have some feature.
The method of showing for story is most important thing.
Most of movie\'s story are similar but, method of telling is different each movie.
I think that that;\'s why different each movie.
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I think that a good movie must have some feature.
>> I think that a good movie must have some unique features.
The method of showing for story is most important thing.
>> The method of showing the story is the most important thing.
Most of movie\'s story are similar but, method of telling is different each movie.
>> Most of the movie\'s stories are similar but, the method of telling the story is different in each movie.
I think that that;\'s why different each movie.
>> With this, the movie will make stand out above others.
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