What qualities do you value in a friend?
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The first value thing is an attitude. If someone was quite rude, I wouldn\'t want to close to them. And, if my friends did it, I\'d notice thing to them. But, I\'m not close to someone, I don\'t care about it. In addition to that, too lazy. Secondly, it\'s the something what I can learn from them. For example, there are the skills, abilities, and knowledge, I can\'t count how valuable it is. Last of all, it\'s how neat someone is. I don\'t want to be nearby someone who is dirty and smells stink. I asked the frog princess \"Are you able to have dinner tomorrow?, we\'re having dinner with all classmates\". And, she said \"Yes, I\'m in!!!\" She looked like lovely, I want to close to her hurry. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
The first value thing is an attitude.
>> The first thing I value is the attitude.
If someone was quite rude, I wouldn\'t want to be close to them.
>> CORRECT!And, if my friends did it, I\'d notice thing to them.
>> And, if my friends did it, I\'d notice it.
But, if I\'m not close to someone, I don\'t care about it.
>> CORRECT!In addition to that, too lazy.
>> In addition to that, it\'s too lazy to think about it.
Secondly, it\'s the something what I can learn from them.
>> Secondly, it\'s the thing that I can learn from them.
For example, there are skills, abilities, and knowledge, I can\'t count how valuable it is.
>> CORRECT!Last of all, it\'s how neat someone is.
>> CORRECT!I don\'t want to be near someone who is dirty and smells stinky.
>> CORRECT!
I asked the frog princess \"Are you able to have dinner tomorrow?, we\'re having dinner with all classmates\".
>> CORRECT!And, she said \"Yes, I\'m in!!!\"
>> CORRECT!She looked like lovely, I want to close to her hurry. :)
>> She looked lovely, I want to be close to her in a hurry. :)
[ I am hoping that you and her would be close friends. :D ~ T. Camille]
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