What realistic changes would you make to your country\'s attitude toward education?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that we should teach kids about money to make good sense of economy when they are young.
To think about it, I only learned thrift and saving and didn\'t learned how to save, manage and invest my money.
Because I didn\'t know how to manage money, I think I wasted much money after I started to earn money.
As money is an essential part to live well, good education about money to kid is necessary.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, [이름]. Thank you for accomplishing a well-done homework once again. I look forward to having the class with you tomorrow. I appreciate your efforts and I hope you have a good one. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I think that we should teach kids about money to make good sense of economy when they are young.
>>> CORRECT =)
To think about it, I only learned thrift and saving and didn\'t learned how to save, manage and invest my money.
>>> Now that I think about it, I only learned thrift and saving and didn\'t learn how to save, manage, and invest my money.
Because I didn\'t know how to manage money, I think I wasted much money after I started to earn money.
>>> CORRECT =)
>>> OR: Because I didn\'t know how to manage money, I think I wasted a lot of money after I started earning money.
As money is an essential part to live well, good education about money to kid is necessary.
>>> As money is an essential part to live well, providing good education on money to kids is necessary.
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