What religious holidays do you know? Do you think they are important? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I know Buddhism holiday I think Buddhism holiday is only important to those who believe in Buddhism.
Because I don\'t believe Buddhism so I think me don\'t important religion.
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What religious holidays do you know? Do you think they are important? Why?
I know Buddhism holiday I think Buddhism holiday is only important to those who believe in Buddhism. Because I don\'t believe Buddhism so I think me don\'t important religion.
>> I know about Buddhist holidays, but I think they are only important to those who believe in Buddhism. Since I don\'t follow Buddhism, I don\'t think this particular religious holiday is very important to me
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