What restaurant do you want to try soon?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to go to Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun Hotel. It is a buffet restaurant.
I like seafood and fresh salad, but my husband and my son like meat and sushi.
At Aria Restaurant, we can all enjoy our favorite foods.
It has a variety food and delicious dishes.
we will soon eat out there on our celebration.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
I searched Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun and the place is classy with very delectable and mouthwatering dishes. Since you are into seafood and fresh salad and your husband and son love meat and sushi, this is the perfect place for you to dine altogether.
I saw some of the desserts and they are a sure hit!
Below, I have a few suggestions in inserting the right preposition as well as the capitalization of the first word in a sentence. Study them carefully.
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I would like to go to Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun Hotel. It is a buffet restaurant.
I like seafood and fresh salad, but my husband and my son like meat and sushi.>> Correct! Very good sentences!
At Aria Restaurant, we can all enjoy our favorite foods.
It has a variety food and delicious dishes.
we will soon eat out there on our celebration.
>> ...It has a variety of food and delicious dishes.
We will soon eat out there on our celebration.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.