what restaurant would you recommend?

2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 May

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First when I heard this topic, I didn't have any particular restaurant I absolutely love that I want to recommend to others. But after gave some thought about it, two great restaurants just dawn on me. And they are close to each other, so for some odd reason, if you ever have an opportunity to visit my town, you should definitely check both of them out! The first restaurant is nice Italian based, cafe form restaurant. It is huge, and there's only few tables in it, so you'll like the atmosphere there. You can chill and have really nice dinner. There's nothing special about food, but it's good. Price is about $20 to $50(possibly if there's lots of people.) The Second one is Japanese home-meal restaurant. I absolutely love the egg roll there. There's some egg roll in Korean food as well, but I think it's way better. You can have nice classic Japanese meal(although I don't know what authentic Japanese meal looks like) with a reasonable price of $15. I don't care for its atmosphere but

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Hi [이름]! Good morning. I appreciate your time in answering your \"very first homework\". Haha.. ^^ Thanks for answering the questions. I know that we have already talked about this topic yesterday. I totally remember the time when you said that you don\'t think there is a good restaurant in your town you would recommend. So now you realized? ^^ Your composition is long. If your answers are too long, you can send it to Power English email.

Someday I will visit South Korea. If I have a chance to visit your town, I would love to go to the restaurants that you recommend and have some classic dinner while indulging myself in a classical music (Wow! ^^).
Anyway, done correcting your composition. Your errors are just minimal. Check them out. There\'s nothing wrong with the grammar, just your sentence structure. Please be careful with the proper punctuations, capitalization, and the time when you need to cut your sentence to make it shorter and simpler.

I\'ll see you later. I am looking forward to check more of your compositions. Hehe.. ^^

~~May~~

First when I heard this topic, I didn\'t have any particular restaurant I absolutely love that I want to recommend to others. But after gave some thought about it, two great restaurants just dawn on me. And they are close to each other, so for some odd reason, if you ever have an opportunity to visit my town, you should definitely check both of them out!
>> At first, when I heard this topic, I didn\'t think that there\'s a particular restaurant I absolutely love which I would want to recommend to others. But after giving some thoughts about it, two great restaurants just dawn on me and they are closed to each other. For some odd reason, if you have an opportunity to visit my town, you should definitely check both of them out! 
The first restaurant is nice Italian based, cafe form restaurant. It is huge, and there\'s only few tables in it, so you\'ll like the atmosphere there. You can chill and have really nice dinner. There\'s nothing special about food, but it\'s good. Price is about $20 to $50(possibly if there\'s lots of people.)
>>
The first restaurant is a nice Italian-based cafe form restaurant. It is huge and there are only few tables, so you\'ll like the atmosphere there. You can chill and you can have a really nice dinner. There\'s nothing special about the foods, but it\'s good. The price is about $20 to $50 (possibly if there are lots of people).
The Second one is Japanese home-meal restaurant. I absolutely love the egg roll there. There\'s some egg roll in Korean food as well, but I think it\'s way better. You can have nice classic Japanese meal(although I don\'t know what authentic Japanese meal looks like) with a reasonable price of $15. I don\'t care for its atmosphere but

>> The second one is a Japanese homemade meal restaurant. I absolutely love the egg roll there. We also have Korean egg rolls, but I think this one is better. You can have a nice classic Japanese meal (although I don\'t know how authentic Japanese meal looks like) with a reasonable price of $15. 

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