What ride do you like the most in an amusement park?
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I can tell you I like most of the rides in an amusement park but for some reasons I like a roller coaster the most. The rollercoaster really thrills me. It is actually a bit scary and it makes me kind of nervous when I was lining up. On the other hand it is super exciting while I’m riding for a moment. I think there is something about the rollercoaster that people are crazy about.
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T. DON
I can tell you I like most of the rides in an amusement park but for
some reasons I like a roller coaster the most. The rollercoaster really
thrills me. It is actually a bit scary and it makes me kind of nervous
when I was lining up. On the other hand it is super exciting while I’m
riding for a moment. I think there is something about the rollercoaster
that people are crazy about.
>> I can tell you I like most of the rides in an amusement park but for
some reasons I like the roller coaster the most. The roller coaster really
thrills me. It is actually a bit scary and it makes me kind of nervous
when I was lining up. On the other hand, it is super exciting while I’m
riding it for a moment. I think there is something about the roller coaster
that people are crazy about.
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