What risks are you willing to take to reach your dreams?
학생이 쓴 원문
To reach my dreams, I can bear a difficult situation. For example, I studied hard to get great score when I was highschool student. If I must bear some hard situation, I\'m willing to hang in there.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. To reach my dreams, I can bear a difficult situation.
>>To reach my dreams, I can bear any difficult situation.
2. For example, I studied hard to get great score when I was highschool student.
>>For example, I studied hard to get high scores when I was still a high school student.
3. If I must bear some hard situation, I\'m willing to hang in there.
>>If I need to bear some hard situation, I will hang in there.
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