What role do mobile devices play in families? And in family conflicts?
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Mobile devices have a strength and a weakness.
A strength is that mobile devices play role which can help to communicate with each other.
A weakness is that my family uses a mobile device when we have a conversation.
I think it is really helpful to our life, but we have to regulate hours of its use.
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Mobile devices have a strength and a weakness.
>> Mobile devices have good sides and bad sides.
A strength is that mobile devices play role which can help to communicate with each other.
>> One of their good sides is that they play a role to help communicate with each other better.
A weakness is that my family uses a mobile device when we have a conversation.
>> One of their bad sides is that they are being used whenever my family and I have conversations.
I think it is really helpful to our life, but we have to regulate hours of its use.
>> I think it is really helpful for our life, but we have to regulate the hours of its use.
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