What role does summer play in shaping food choices and eating habithat.
학생이 쓴 원문
The summer is [이름]nged about house,because air conditioning and electric band search in the house.
Not in my house? I\'m so sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your second revised composition from the past few weeks of homework. I appreciate your sending it. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
What role does summer play in shaping food choices and eating habitat?
The summer is [이름]nged about house,because air conditioning and electric band search in the house.
>>> Summer [이름]nges life at home, because air conditioning and electricity use increase.
>>> OR: At home, summer means more electricity use, especially for air conditioning.
Not in my house? I\'m so sad.
>>> Unfortunately, I don’t have air conditioning in my house, which makes me sad.
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