What role does technology change play in creating a generation gap?
학생이 쓴 원문
almost people think technology makes more gap, but i\'m not
i think technology can make lower gap.
through technology we can communicate with our parents, even grand parents ask their grand child that how to use smart phone.
this is positive reaction i think.
yes definitely, technology makes negative phenomenon .
it makes blocking conversation, feel alone and so on.
we need to see positive face.
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Hi [이름],
That was a good response to the homework you were given. Thank you for sharing your ideas:)
-Rachel
almost people think technology makes more gap, but i\'m not.
>> Most people think technology creates more gap, but I don\'t.
i think technology can make lower gap.
i think technology can make lower gap.
>> I think technology can shorten the gap.
through technology we can communicate with our parents, even grand parents ask their grand child that how to use smart phone. this is positive reaction i think.
through technology we can communicate with our parents, even grand parents ask their grand child that how to use smart phone. this is positive reaction i think.
>> Through technology, we can communicate with people and family members more efficiently, and I think this is a positive aspect.
yes definitely, technology makes negative phenomenon . it makes blocking conversation, feel alone and so on. we need to see positive face.
>> Definitely, technology has its own negative sides such as making people feel more lonely because they don\'t socialize or hindering conversations because people don\'t want to answer phone calls or text messages, but we still need to see the positive side.
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