What role does technology play in schools?
학생이 쓴 원문
we learn to many technology knowledge in school.
first, we learn to manners.
example, how to eatting manner, the other person\'s gretting...
manners are one of t the important.
second, we learn to many subject.(math, society, science, art...)
sure of same as math, society\'s...subjects are important, but art, same as phycal education, art, music are subject important too.
phycal education, art, music\'s subjects are healing to students.
and we make many good friends in school.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I agree! We learn academic subjects at school, but extracurricular classes are also important for our development. Also, I think nowadays, with the advancement of technology, instead of using physical books, Korea wants to implement the use of tablets as alternatives. I believe this can help students research faster and learn more through videos and pictures.
- T. Caitlyn
we learn to many technology knowledge in school.
>> We learn a lot of technological knowledge in school.
first, we learn to manners.
first, we learn to manners.
>> First, we learn manners.
example, how to eatting manner, the other person\'s gretting...
example, how to eatting manner, the other person\'s gretting...
>> For example, table manners and how to greet others.
manners are one of t the important.
manners are one of t the important.
>> Manners are one of the most important things.
second, we learn to many subject.(math, society, science, art...)
second, we learn to many subject.(math, society, science, art...)
>> Second, we learn many subjects (math, social studies, science, art, etc.).
sure of same as math, society\'s...subjects are important, but art, same as phycal education, art, music are subject important too.
sure of same as math, society\'s...subjects are important, but art, same as phycal education, art, music are subject important too.
>> Subjects like math and social studies are important, but subjects like physical education, art, and music are also important.
phycal education, art, music\'s subjects are healing to students.
phycal education, art, music\'s subjects are healing to students.
>> Physical education, art, and music can be healing for students.
and we make many good friends in school.
and we make many good friends in school.
>> CORRECT
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