What rude behavior do you see in public every day?

2016-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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People spit on the ground, throw a cigarette butt out of car window while driving, or leave the door smash the next person coming. A man is sitting on the subway spreading his legs widely. Children hops here and there while making loud noise in the restaurant and the worst thing is that their parents don’t try to stop them. People throw away trashes like soda cans, paper cups for coffee, plastic snack bags, etc. I feel shame and guilty because I am not free from being accused. We wouldn’t behavior as such at home, however, we do less care about environments and etiquette when we are outside home. We are all getting more selfish. We are all mindful of ours only: My house, my kid, my family, my car, etc. Our society is getting desolate. We should be more considerate of other people around us. It is really irritating to see people speaking loud while making a phone call on the subway. Some old women run and push away others to take a seat on the subway, which is quite annoying to see.

강사 첨삭

Happy day to you Sir [이름]. ^^

Oh my! I totally agree with you.

To be honest, I was once accused of throwing something outside the window of our school.

Unfortunately, I didn\'t have any idea who did it. So I cleaned the classroom for one day.

We have to think of the welfare of the younger generation.
We should also teach them how to care for our environment.

Being aware of our nature should start within us.

Take care.

Teacher Nina


People spit on the ground, throw a cigarette butt out of car window while driving, or leave the door smash the next person coming.

>> People spit on the ground, throw a cigarette butt out of car window while driving, or shut/ slam the door in someone\'s face.

A man is sitting on the subway spreading his legs widely.

>> correct

Children hops here and there while making loud noise in the restaurant and the worst thing is that their parents don’t try to stop them.

>> correct

People throw away trashes like soda cans, paper cups for coffee, plastic snack bags, etc.

>> correct

I feel shame and guilty because I am not free from being accused.

>> correct

We wouldn’t behavior as such at home, however, we do less care about environments and etiquette when we are outside home.

>> We wouldn’t have that kind of behavior as such at home, however, we do less care about our environment and etiquette when we are outside our home.

We are all getting more selfish.

>> Better: We are all becoming more selfish.

We are all mindful of ours only: My house, my kid, my family, my car, etc. 

>> correct 

Our society is getting desolate.

>> correct

We should be more considerate of other people around us.

>> correct

It is really irritating to see people speaking loud while making a phone call on the subway.

>> correct

Some old women run and push away others to take a seat on the subway, which is quite annoying to see.

>> correct

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