What\'s a hobby you’ve always wanted to try but haven’t yet?
학생이 쓴 원문
i like \"007 movie series\". this movie\'s main character is 007.
007 wears omega brand watches. omega\'s watches is attracting me.
so i found price omega watches(same as 007 model).
but this watches is very expensive. so i gived up this watches.
but i interesting another wathches. and i want to collect watches hobby.
sure of i can\'t buy expensive watches now, but someday i will collect expensive and beautiful watches.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It’s nice to know that you want to collect watches as a hobby. I agree that collecting them can cost a lot, but it can also motivate you to save and work harder. Sometimes, expensive collections can be like investments, too.
- T. Caitlyn
i like \"007 movie series\".
>> I like the 007 movie series.
this movie\'s main character is 007.
>> The main character in the movie is 007.
007 wears omega brand watches.
007 wears omega brand watches.
>> CORRECT
omega\'s watches is attracting me.
>> Omega watches attract me.
so i found price omega watches(same as 007 model).
so i found price omega watches(same as 007 model).
>> So I looked up the price of Omega watches (the same model as 007’s).
but this watches is very expensive.
but this watches is very expensive.
>> But these watches are very expensive.
so i gived up this watches.
>> So I gave up on buying these watches.
but i interesting another wathches.
but i interesting another wathches.
>> But I\'m interested in other watches.
and i want to collect watches hobby.
>> I want to collect watches as a hobby.
sure of i can\'t buy expensive watches now, but someday i will collect expensive and beautiful watches.
sure of i can\'t buy expensive watches now, but someday i will collect expensive and beautiful watches.
>> Of course, I can’t buy expensive watches now, but someday I will collect expensive and beautiful ones.
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