What’s a new recreational activity you’d like to try, and why?
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my new recreational activity is travelling with my puppy.
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
nowhere doesn\'t matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a [이름]a lake..
as long as dogs are allowed^^
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Hello [이름]!✨
That sounds like a lot of fun! Exploring new places with Anni must be a great adventure.
~Kelly🌹
my new recreational activity is travelling with my puppy.
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>> I’ve taken up traveling with my puppy as a new recreational activity.
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
>> Whenever I go to my hometown, I visit new places with Anni (my puppy).
nowhere doesn\'t matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a [이름]a lake.. as long as dogs are allowed^^
nowhere doesn\'t matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a [이름]a lake.. as long as dogs are allowed^^
>> It doesn’t matter where - whether it’s a café, restaurant, [이름] or lake - as long as dogs are allowed.
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