What's advantages of living in dormotories or apartments?
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Hello Erine!
University students have option to live either in dormitories or apartments by themselves. Some students prefer to live in the campus while others feel it’s better to live outside. Living in dormitories usually costs you less and provides you meals, for free or paid, which reduces stress of cooking and deciding what to eat everytime. On the other hands living in apartments gives you more freedom from making your own food to having party at late night. Also you have wider option in accommodating such as room size, house type, location, person to live with and so on. For me, dormitory was a better option. It was easier to use school facilities such as gym or library. Also I was able to visit my friends’ rooms in pajamas whenever I wanted to. Above all, I can't deny cheaper price was the most critical aspect of my choice, it was only a quarter of what I had to pay living outside of the campus.
Thank you! Enjoy the weekend:D
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Here I am again, Chae Yoon!^^
It was indeed a good thing for me to know your ideas about our topic.
With this way, I tend to know more of the real \"Chae Yoon\"!^^
I really like knowing what my students prefer so I can know more about their personalities, too!^^
If you were about to ask me, I prefer to live in an apartment.
I care about the cost of living, as well. However, privacy, for me, is the most important thing!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hello Erine!>>Hello, Erine!University students have option to live either in dormitories or apartments by themselves.
>>University students have the option to live either in dormitories or apartments by themselves.
Some students prefer to live in the campus while others feel it’s better to live outside.
>> Correct.
Living in dormitories usually costs you less and provides you meals, for free or paid, which reduces stress of cooking and deciding what to eat everytime.
>> Correct.
or>> Living in dormitories can lessen our expenditures for the house and for the food.
On the other hands living in apartments gives you more freedom from making your own food to having party at late night.
>> On the other hand, living in apartments gives you more freedom to make your own food and have parties late at night.
Also you have wider option in accommodating such as room size, house type, location, person to live with and so on.
>> You also have wider options in accommodating such as room size, house type, location, person to live with and so on.
For me, dormitory was a better option.
>> Correct.
It was easier to use school facilities such as gym or library.
>> It was easier to use the school facilities such as the gym or the library.
Also I was able to visit my friends’ rooms in pajamas whenever I wanted to.
>> I was also able to visit my friends\' rooms in pyjamas whenever I wanted to.
Above all, I can\'t deny cheaper price was the most critical aspect of my choice, it was only a quarter of what I had to pay living outside of the campus.>> Above all, I wouldn\'t deny that the cheaper price was the most critical aspect of my choice, which was only a quarter of what I had to pay living outside of the campus.Thank you! Enjoy the weekend:D
>>Correct!
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