What\'s an experience you\'ve had that made you feel the most proud of yourself? (3-5 sentences)
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 16 years old, I learnd to Korea traditional dance.
I was passionate and, I was praised everyone.
That is experience that felt the most proud of myself.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Lea!
Practice makes progress!
-Hanna ^^
When I was 16 years old, I learnd to Korea traditional dance.
>>When I was 16 yeard old, I learned the Korean traditional dance.
I was passionate and, I was praised everyone.
>>I was passionate and was praised by everyone.
That is experience that felt the most proud of myself.
>>That is the experience that I felt the most proud of myself.
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