What\'s more important to you when you travel - comfort and relaxation, or stimulating new experienc
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I think mindfulness and action are important. Because I feel good when I have a good mindset. Because if you think negatively when you go on a trip, you will continue to feel bad about it. Behavior is because if I lazy behavior, everything can be troublesome.
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Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think mindfulness and action are important.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I feel good when I have a good mindset.
>>> CORRECT!
Because if you think negatively when you go on a trip, you will continue to feel bad about it.
>>> CORRECT!
Behavior is because if I lazy behavior, everything can be troublesome.
>>> Behavior is because if I am lazy behavior, everything can be troublesome.
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