What’s more important to you when you travel-comfort and relaxation or stimulating new experiences?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like both, but I usually prefer having new experiences.
Having a relax is also available in your home.
We need to use our precious time when we go to travel somewhere.
So, I believe having a new experiences is more better.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I like both, but I usually prefer having new experiences.
While I appreciate both, I generally prefer gaining new experiences.
Having a relax is also available in your home.
Relaxing is also possible at home.
We need to use our precious time when we go to travel somewhere.
We need to use our precious time wisely when we travel somewhere.
So, I believe having a new experiences is more better.
For this reason, I believe that seeking new experiences is the better choice.
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