What’s my opinion of myself?

2022-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

The opinion of myself is that I am a well rounded person. Because I can adapt to a new environment relatively quickly and I am quick-witted, so I can adapt myself to the atmosphere of a new place. Also, I\'m a good friend to play with. Because I like to buy food for my friends and I do what they want to do first. I think I\'m a nice person. All my friends say they feel comfortable when they are with me. I want to be a better friend to my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello,  Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The opinion of myself is that I am a well rounded person. 
>>> My opinion of myself is that I am a well-rounded person.

Because I can adapt to a new environment relatively quickly and I am quick-witted, so I can adapt myself to the atmosphere of a new place. 
>>> Because I can adapt to a new environment relatively quickly and I am quick-witted, I can adapt myself to the atmosphere of a new place. 

Also, I\'m a good friend to play with. 
>>> Also, I\'m a good friend to get along with.

Because I like to buy food for my friends and I do what they want to do first. 
>>> CORRECT!

I think I\'m a nice person. 
>>> CORRECT!

All my friends say they feel comfortable when they are with me. 
>>> CORRECT!

I want to be a better friend to my friends.
>>> CORRECT!


- You are a wonderful student as well, Sheila. :) 

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