What`s new with you?
학생이 쓴 원문
What`s new with you?
There`s nothing new event what I happened. I have an ordinary days without big changing these days.
What are the major events you have with your family?
I haven`t the major events with my family. but I wish my sons get married with adorable women and have the grandson this year.
강사 첨삭
What`s new with you?
There`s nothing new event what I happened.
There`s nothing new event what I happened.
>>> There\'s nothing new that had happened.
>>> OR: There\'s no new event that had happened.
I have an ordinary days without big changing these days.
>>> I am just having ordinary days without big changes these days.
What are the major events you have with your family?
I haven`t the major events with my family. but I wish my sons get married with adorable women and have the grandson this year.
>>> I am just having ordinary days without big changes these days.
What are the major events you have with your family?
I haven`t the major events with my family. but I wish my sons get married with adorable women and have the grandson this year.
>>> I haven`t had major events with my family, but I wish my sons get married with adorable women and have a grandson this year.
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