What’s new with you?
학생이 쓴 원문
This month, I am going to hold a memorial service in my house.
My relatives are coming to my house.
Because I am first daughter in low.
My mother in low will come to my house.
She will stay for a week.
Once a year she came here.
Every time I am always nervous with her.
I must stop all my life, studying, exercising,meeting and power english.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
I didn\'t know that the situation you told me before is quite complicated.
We have a different culture. I am also the first daughter-in-law but in my case, I can be who I am whenever I am with my in laws.
Then I wish you \"fighting\" when that day comes :)
See you in class.
Aki~
This month, I am going to hold a memorial service in my house.
>>> This month, I am going to hold a memorial service at my house.
My relatives are coming to my house.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I am first daughter in low.
>>> Because I am the first daughter-in-law.
My mother in low will come to my house.
>>> My mother-in-law will come to my house.
She will stay for a week.
>>> CORRECT!
Once a year she came here.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> She came to my house once a year
Every time I am always nervous with her.
>>> I am always nervous whenever she is around.
I must stop all my life, studying, exercising,meeting and power english.
>>> I must stop doing almost everything like studying, exercising, meeting my friend, and even classes in Power English.
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