What’s new with you?
학생이 쓴 원문
What’s new with you?
I don\'t have anything.
but this year, I have a experience that first time in my life.
It is the overseas trip for two months in a row!
I went to Sapporo, Japan on january and I\'m going to guam on next month with my younger sister.
It\'s fairly precious experience to me!
강사 첨삭
Hi Angela,
Wow, great to hear that you are enjoying your life at this stage. Go ahead because once you have a baby, it will be difficult for you to travel. ^^
Aki~
I don\'t have anything.
>>> CORRECT!
but this year, I have a experience that first time in my life.
>>> but this year, I had an experience for the first time in my life.
It is the overseas trip for two months in a row!
>>> It is the overseas trip for two months in a row!
I went to Sapporo, Japan on january and I\'m going to guam on next month with my younger sister.
>>> I went to Sapporo, Japan in January and I\'m going to Guam next month with my younger sister.
It\'s fairly precious experience to me!
>> It\'s a fairly precious experience for me!
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