What\'s new with you since you moved to Canada?

2022-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

A lot of things happened to me since I came to Canada. I’m living in the strange countryside. I’ve been looking at a lot of snow all the time in winter and I’ve also seen the northern light, fortunately. It was amazing and made me surprised and happy. I was scheduled to go to college to study English and major last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic. The online class is too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency. My English skill is not good now but I think it’s being better than I was in Korea. Furthermore, I went on a vacation with my husband to Banff last September. I was looking forward to this travel since some months ago. It was quite a fantastic place as I thought. We spent a week there and we had a great time we can’t forget. I keep trying to adjust to this life including English and my neighborhood.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this [이름]! It\'s definitely difficult at first, but you\'ll get used to everything in time. Good luck!

A lot of things happened to me since I came to Canada. 
>>>  correct 
I’m living in the strange countryside. 
>>>  correct 
I’ve been looking at a lot of snow all the time in winter and I’ve also seen the northern light, fortunately. 
>>> correct   
It was amazing and made me surprised and happy.
>>> correct 
I was scheduled to go to college to study English and major last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic. 
>>>  I was scheduled to go to college to study and major in English last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic.  
The online class is too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency. 
>>> The online class was too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency.   
My English skill is not good now but I think it’s being better than I was in Korea.
>>> My English skill is not good now but I think it’s better than when I was in Korea.  
Furthermore, I went on a vacation with my husband to Banff last September. 
>>>  correct 
I was looking forward to this travel since some months ago. 
>>> correct 
It was quite a fantastic place as I thought. 
>>> correct  
We spent a week there and we had a great time we can’t forget.
>>>  correct 
I keep trying to adjust to this life including English and my neighborhood.
>>>  correct 

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