What’s on your bucket list this year?

2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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Hi Ysabelle I thought about homewok for bucket list I have 3 bucket list in 2020 First I gonna to study english hard for i communicate foreign people this goal stimulate me Second I will go ireland I wish that i work park-time job this experence will very impression for me Third I love trave[이름]g for another country so, I hope travel many another country alone for example, Iceland,Spain and Switzerland This is my old dream That\'s all Maybe continuously update my bucklist Thank you for watching

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I\'m glad you were able to determine what you want to happen.

Work hard and you will achieve all of these~

I really enjoyed reading your homework.

See you in class!

I thought about homewok for bucket list

>>I thought about my homework about the bucket list.

I have 3 bucket list in 2020

>>I have 3 things I want to accomplish in 2020.

First
I gonna to study english hard for i communicate foreign people

>>First, I will study English hard so I can communicate with foreign people.

this goal stimulate me

>>This goal motivates me.

Second
I will go ireland

>>Second, I will go to Ireland.

I wish that i work park-time job

>I wish I can have a part-time job.

this experence will very impression for me

>>This experience will make a good impression for me.

Third
I love trave[이름]g for another country

>>Third, I love trave[이름]g to another country.

so, I hope travel many another country alone

>>So, I hope I can travel to many countries alone.

for example, Iceland,Spain and Switzerland

>> Like Iceland, Spain and Switzerland.

This is my old dream.

>>This was an old dream of mine.

That\'s all.

>>CORRECT

Maybe continuously update my bucklist

>>I might continuously update my bucket list.

Thank you for watching

>>Thank you for reading.

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