What’s on your bucket list this year?
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Hahaha...
I haven\'t thought my bucket list this year.
I think that this year is the turnning point of my life.
Because I live in a new location where I haven’t gone and join a new company and work on a new optics’ field and meet new persons.
So I thought that I had to adapt to a present situation to get somethings new.
I will spend a lot of time for them therefore I may not have enough time in my life of this year.
But I expect that I will have a spare time for me after 6 months than now.
If it’s that time, I want to visit at Coron or Elnido of Palawan in Philippines for a scuba diving.
I heard that there’s very beautiful under the sea and around the environment.
I image diving in there and then suddenly I don’t want to work.
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Hi there [이름]!
I haven\'t thought my bucket list this year.
I think that this year is the turnning point of my life.
Because I live in a new location where I haven’t gone and join a new company and work on a new optics’ field and meet new persons.
So I thought that I had to adapt to a present situation to get somethings new.
I will spend a lot of time for them therefore I may not have enough time in my life of this year.
But I expect that I will have a spare time for me after 6 months than now.
If it’s that time, I want to visit at Coron or Elnido of Palawan in Philippines for a scuba diving.
I heard that there’s very beautiful under the sea and around the environment.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this homework!
I hope you will be able to do all these things~
Have a great weekend!
I haven\'t thought my bucket list this year.
>>I haven\'t thought about my bucket list this year.
I think that this year is the turnning point of my life.
>>I think that this year is the turning point of my life.
Because I live in a new location where I haven’t gone and join a new company and work on a new optics’ field and meet new persons.
>>I live in a new location where I haven\'t gone to and I need to join a new company for work with a new optics field and be able to meet new people as well.
So I thought that I had to adapt to a present situation to get somethings new.
>>So, I thought that I have to adapt to the present situation and get something new.
I will spend a lot of time for them therefore I may not have enough time in my life of this year.
>>I will spend a lot of time with them therefore I may not have enough time for myself this year.
But I expect that I will have a spare time for me after 6 months than now.
>>But I also expect that I will have some spare time for myself after 6 months.
If it’s that time, I want to visit at Coron or Elnido of Palawan in Philippines for a scuba diving.
>>If that time comes, I want to visit Coron or El Nido in Palawan to go scuba diving.
I heard that there’s very beautiful under the sea and around the environment.
>>I heard that there\'s a very beautiful sea and environment.
I image diving in there and then suddenly I don’t want to work.
>>I imagine diving there and suddenly don\'t want to work.
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