What’s one change you want to make in your daily routine for the new year?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to drop a bad habit this new year.
I often watch my bed a shot video of You Tube before I sleep and as soon as I woke up in the morning.
I really know It\'s not right but it\'s hard to stop.
I \'d like to try less the You Tube.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! Breaking a bad habit isn\'t going to be easy. It takes a lot of time and effort. Good luck! ^^ It will be tough, but I hope you can do it. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I want to drop a bad habit this new year.
>>I want to break a bad habit this New Year.
I often watch my bed a shot video of You Tube before I sleep and as soon as I woke up in the morning.
>>I often watch a short video on YouTube before I sleep and as soon as I wake up in the morning.
I really know It\'s not right but it\'s hard to stop.
I really know It\'s not right but it\'s hard to stop.
>>I know it\'s not right, but it\'s hard to stop.
I \'d like to try less the You Tube.
I \'d like to try less the You Tube.
>>I\'d like to spend less time on YouTube.
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