What’s one new thing you tried on a trip that you really enjoyed?
학생이 쓴 원문
I tried new thing is trying no matter what.
When I went to Peru,my challenge first time was surfing on the sand desert.
I hesitaed so much that take on it or not?
The Peruvian guide told me silently , it\'s oky,it\'s oky
Fianlly I took a board on the sand and it was an unforgable experience.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Wow, that sounds amazing! Trying sandboarding in Peru must have been such a brave and unforgettable adventure. ^^ Thanks for sharing! ^^
~T. Jewel
I tried new thing is trying no matter what.
>>I like trying new things, no matter what.
When I went to Peru,my challenge first time was surfing on the sand desert.
When I went to Peru,my challenge first time was surfing on the sand desert.
>>When I went to Peru, my first challenge was sandboarding in the desert.
I hesitaed so much that take on it or not?
I hesitaed so much that take on it or not?
>>I hesitated so much about whether to take it on or not.
The Peruvian guide told me silently , it\'s oky,it\'s oky
>>The Peruvian guide told me quietly, \'It’s okay, it’s okay.\'
OR
>>The Peruvian guide told me quietly that it was okay.
Fianlly I took a board on the sand and it was an unforgable experience.
>>The Peruvian guide told me quietly that it was okay.
Fianlly I took a board on the sand and it was an unforgable experience.
>>Finally, I rode a board on the sand, and it was an unforgettable experience.
OR
>>Finally, I went sandboarding, and it was an unforgettable experience.
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