What’s one of your most favorite memories??

2018-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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My American friends came to Korea and traveled together. I did not speak english very well, but time spent together was very fun and I wanted to learn English harder.

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My American friends came to Korea and traveled together.

>> My American friends came to Korea and we traveled together.


I did not speak english very well, but time spent together was very fun and I wanted to learn English harder.

>> I did not speak English very well but time spent together was very fun and I wanted to learn English harder.


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