What's one thing in your home you couldm't live without? why?

2017-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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One thing in my home I couldn't live without is my cellphone. There are two reasons why I choose it. The first reason is that, I can communicate with my family and friends by using it. So, whenever I have some problems, it helps me easily discuss with them. Another reason is that, It allows me to save my time. If I have some quetions, I can search about them right away. It is really useful. As a result, I can't live without my cellphone.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. Anyway, you can also answer this question by mentioning one thing that you can only find in your home. Thank you and have a good day!^^

~Kelly^^

One thing in my home I couldn\'t live without is my cellphone.

>> The one thing in my home that I couldn\'t live without is my cellphone.

There are two reasons why I choose it.

>> Correct.

or:

>> There are two reasons to support my answer.

The first reason is that, I can communicate with my family and friends by using it.

>> Correct.

or:

>> Firstly, I can easily keep in touch with my family and friends by using it.

So, whenever I have some problems, it helps me easily discuss with them.

>> So, whenever I have some problems, it helps me to easily discuss with them.

or:

>> When I have some trouble, I can easily contact them and discuss my problems with them.
Another reason is that, It allows me to save my time.

>> Correct.

If I have some quetions, I can search about them right away. It is really useful.

>> Correct.
As a result, I can\'t live without my cellphone.

>> Correct.

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