What’s one thing in your home you couldn’t live without? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
A computer is one thing in my home I couldn\'t live without.
Because I do almost everything like homework and search with computer.
And I even spend my break time while doing computer like watching YouTube.
So, a computer is for me such an important thing.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because I do almost everything like homework and search with computer.
And I even spend my break time while doing computer like watching YouTube.
So, a computer is for me such an important thing.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
A computer is one thing in my home I couldn\'t live without.
>> CORRECT!
Because I do almost everything like homework and search with computer.
>> Because I do almost everything like homework and search for things on the computer.
And I even spend my break time while doing computer like watching YouTube.
>> And I even spend my break time while on the computer like watching YouTube.
So, a computer is for me such an important thing.
>> So, a computer for me is such an important thing.
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