What’s one thing in your home you couldn’t live without? Why?
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The one thing I have to need in my home is natural humidifier which is made by my husband. Winter of Hokkaido is too cold,so we must use stove and heater. However, they lower the humidity seriously. Especially stove does. In winter, natural condition of my room is too dry, I always feel itchy in my skin. Therefore my husband made a natural humidifier. We don\'t like mechanical humidifier which needs management everyday. Structure of natural humidifier is simple and it doesn\'t need everyday management,so it is good for use. It is the best item in my home.
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Hello Julia! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
The one thing I have to need in my home is natural humidifier which is made by my husband.
>> The one thing I couldn\'t live without at home is a natural humidifier, which is made by my husband.
Winter of Hokkaido is too cold,so we must use stove and heater.
>> The winter in Hokkaido is too cold, so we must use a stove and heater.
However, they lower the humidity seriously.
>> CORRECT!
Especially stove does.
>> Especially the stove.
In winter, natural condition of my room is too dry, I always feel itchy in my skin.
>> In winter, the natural condition of my room is too dry. My skin feels so itchy.
Therefore my husband made a natural humidifier.
>> CORRECT!
We don\'t like mechanical humidifier which needs management everyday.
>> We don\'t like the mechanical humidifier which needs to be operated every day.
Structure of natural humidifier is simple and it doesn\'t need everyday management,so it is good for use.
>> The structure of a natural humidifier is simple and it doesn\'t need every day management. So it\'s really good to use.
It is the best item in my home.
>> It is the best thing in my home.
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