What’s one thing you could never live without and why?
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Hi, Jane!
Indeed, family is the most important thing to most people.
Family helps us shape our personality.
Thank you for this composition.
Have a great Friday and enjoy the weekend my dear. ^_^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I can\'t live without my family of course.
>> correct
Family is the reason of my exsistance.
>> My family is the reason of my existence.
Most of all people have bad period in their life.
>> Most of the people have ups and downs in their life.
>> or: Most people. if not all, have their lowest point in life.
It\'s really hard to handle on one\'s own.
>> correct
>> or: It\'s hard to live on your own.
I think family can real help at that time.
>> I think family can really help at that time.
I can share my sadness or concerns with them.
>> correct
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