What’s one thing you could never live without and why?

2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I can't live without my family of course. Family is the reason of my exsistance. Most of all people have bad period in their life. It's really hard to handle on one's own. I think family can real help at that time. I can share my sadness or concerns with them.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!


Indeed, family is the most important thing to most people.

Family helps us shape our personality. 

Thank you for this composition.

Have a great Friday and enjoy the weekend my dear. ^_^


_Teacher Dianne ^^ 


I can\'t live without my family of course.

>> correct
 Family is the reason of my exsistance.

>> My family is the reason of my existence.
 Most of all people have bad period in their life.

>> Most of the people have ups and downs in their life.

>> or: Most people. if not all, have their lowest point in life.
 It\'s really hard to handle on one\'s own.

>> correct

>> or: It\'s hard to live on your own.
 I think family can real help at that time.

>> I think family can really help at that time.
 I can share my sadness or concerns with them.

>> correct


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