What’s one thing you could never live without and why? Explain in 5 sentences

2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

I could never live without communication. I think communication is very important between people. Communication includes talking, e-mail, chatting and so on. Our society can’t develop without communication. It is used in many fields. For example, when we provided education, communication is very important between teacher and student. When we enjoy musical or concert, communication is the necessary key point between musician and audience. When we meeting with another company, we always using e-mail, telephone, skype and so on. Even in global market, communication with different language is needed.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, [이름]! How are you doing? I hope you had a great weekend. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. I know how busy you are but you continue to answer your homework everyday. I agree with your answers too. I commend you for that. Great job! See you soon! I\'m so excited to hear your stories.   Teacher Carmen ^^   I could never live without communication. >> Correct! I think communication is very important between people. >> I think communication is very important among people.   Communication includes talking, e-mail, chatting and so on. >> Correct!   Our society can’t develop without communication. >> Correct! OR>> Our society cannot progress without communication.   It is used in many fields. >> Correct! OR>> It is used in a lot of aspects. For example, when we provided education, communication is very important between teacher and student. >> For example, communication is very important in providing education between the teacher and the student.  When we enjoy musical or concert, communication is the necessary key point between musician and audience. >> Communication is a necessary key point between musicians and the audience during musicals or concerts. When we meeting with another company, we always using e-mail, telephone, skype and so on. >> When we have a meeting with another company, we always use e-mails, telephone, skype and so on.   Even in global market, communication with different language is needed. >>Communication using different languages is also needed even in the global market.

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