What’s one thing you’re most excited about at your son\'s wedding?
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Tomorrow is my son\'s wedding. I am exciting all the things. I never seen intimate wedding. I prepare congratulatory message for them. I have written it for long time, because I have something that I want to say to them. I think that I can\'t write all my thinking, but I belive that they will know my mind. I feel that he is young yet, l can\'t belive he\'s wedding. I feel so sad, because it seems like my son going somewhere. But I will think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.
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Hello, Ms. [Name]!
Weddings are one of the highlights in a relationship of couple. I feel happy every time I hear someone getting married. I hope that your son and his wife will have a happy marriage just like you.
Aki~
Tomorrow is my son\'s wedding.
>>> CORRECT!
I am exciting all the things.
>>> I am excited about all the things.
I never seen intimate wedding. I prepare congratulatory message for them.
>>> I have never seen an intimate wedding. I prepared a congratulatory message for them.
I have written it for long time, because I have something that I want to say to them.
>>> I have written it for a long time, because I have something that I want to say to them.
I think that I can\'t write all my thinking, but I belive that they will know my mind.
>>> I believe that I can\'t express all my thoughts, but I trust they will understand my perspective.
I feel that he is young yet, l can\'t belive he\'s wedding.
>>> I feel that he is young yet, l can\'t believe that he is getting married.
I feel so sad, because it seems like my son going somewhere.
>>> I feel so sad, because it seems like my son is going somewhere.
But I will think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.
>>> But I just think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.
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