What’s one thing you’ve won and how did you win it? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm at the soccer game. 3 years ago I got 2 points on a game and it became to won
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That sounds really exciting.
I understand how much you like sports.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m at the soccer game. >> I was at a soccer game once.
3 years ago I got 2 points on a game and it became to won
>> Three years ago, I scored two points and it made us win.
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