What’s something you did once but would never do again?
학생이 쓴 원문
when i soldier, i started smoking.
i thought smoking is relieve stress.
but smoking is not related to Stress.
smoking only have bad points.
first, smoking is causes ill. and very bad smell.
second, smoking is pay money.smoking is addictive.
if i taking to time machine to ago, i don\'t never smoking.
sure of i\'m not smoking now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It’s really nice that you were able to quit smoking because others who are addicted to it find it really difficult to do so. I agree with you; don’t try to smoke again for your health.
-T. Caitlyn
when i soldier, i started smoking.
>> When I was a soldier, I started smoking.
i thought smoking is relieve stress.
i thought smoking is relieve stress.
>> I thought smoking could relieve stress.
but smoking is not related to Stress.
but smoking is not related to Stress.
>> CORRECT
smoking only have bad points.
smoking only have bad points.
>> Smoking only has bad points.
first, smoking is causes ill. and very bad smell.
first, smoking is causes ill. and very bad smell.
>> First, smoking causes illness and has a very bad smell.
second, smoking is pay money.smoking is addictive.
second, smoking is pay money.smoking is addictive.
>> Second, smoking costs money and is addictive.if i taking to time machine to ago, i don\'t never smoking.
>> If I could take a time machine back, I would never smoke.
sure of i\'m not smoking now.
sure of i\'m not smoking now.
>> Of course, I’m not smoking now.
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