What\'s special about Busan?
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Busan is special because Busan ocean is very beautiful and Busan market is very famous.
And Busan in the very good food
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What\'s special about Busan?
Busan is special because Busan ocean is very beautiful and Busan market is very famous.
>> Busan is special because the ocean is magnificent and the market is very famous.
And Busan in the very good food
>> And the food in the city is delectable.
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